ext_23085 ([identity profile] kellychambliss.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mothwing 2010-11-14 05:08 pm (UTC)

Excellent -- as always, your details are just so right. Minerva has grown perfectly since the image of her leaving on the train: her clothes and height and body are so clearly a 15-year-old's. And of course she always has her wand at hand. You can just see how proud she is. You've managed to make her parents seem so supportive, even in silhouette. And what's that behind her father's back? A surprise for his girl?

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